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That restless sunday evening

Will he reach on time?
Or should I call him to confirm? Oh God! To hell with the city traffic.. I could hear honks here.. there.. everywhere.. It's a jam. Wait.. What is this? Clouds from nowhere. Oh man! Is it gonna rain now? I sat there biting my finger nails with a trillion thoughts in my mind.

It was one beautiful Sunday evening. Mom and dad had a family function to attend and there I was left jaded and alone. After a while of debate between the good me and the bad me, I decided to get myself some company to spend the evening.

My heartbeat, still raising with every second as the minute hand raced towards the estimated time. What am I supposed to do? Should I call him or atleast send a text? I took my mobile and checked for messages. There weren't any. My smile slowly flattened. All of a sudden a grave silence spread across my soul. I started walking hither and thither restlessly with my eyes fixed on the wall clock.

In a few minutes..
*Ting tong*
I jumped off from the couch to reach the door skipping a few hurdles on the way. (*Beautiful bgm plays in my head*). Aahh!! And there he was standing in a pair of denims and a blue shirt neatly tucked in, with a red box in his right hand. I stood there captivated, mesmerized and spellbound. I couldn't take my eyes off the beautiful box he was holding . For a second I was lost.
His voice pulled me back to reality..

"Hello" ..
"Mam your delivery", he said.
(Few seconds later)

I stared at the double cheese pan pizza with thin slices of pepperoni dug in the gooey white top layer lying there on the table.

"So.. You came all the way across hurdles, through the rain and the city traffic just to find place in my tummy? Aww.." I whispered.

Now that's what you call true love ❤️

Comments

  1. Sruthi3 July 2018 at 04:33

    Lmao.. Now that's true love indeed. Haha.

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  2. Faize3 July 2018 at 04:59

    Hahaha superb 👌👌👌. Unexpected conclusion

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  3. Unknown3 July 2018 at 05:28

    Ada ada!

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  4. Anthea3 July 2018 at 05:29

    Humorous .. Had a good laugh in the end.

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  5. Unknown3 July 2018 at 06:19

    Nice..... unpredicted ending....hahah...🤣🤣🤣

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  6. tanima4 July 2018 at 19:22

    hahahah, very cute article. enjoyed reading it.

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  7. Unknown5 July 2018 at 09:49

    Best love story ever!!! I really enjoyed reading this. Now I want pizza!

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    1. Amreena Jan6 July 2018 at 00:26

      Oops.. I'm afraid.. now u have to wait until Sunday. 😉

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  8. Cassie5 July 2018 at 19:29

    Pizza is my true love too! What a great surprise conclusion

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    1. Amreena Jan6 July 2018 at 01:57

      Let's be pizza-mates then 😁 hi-fi 😎

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  9. Thatsmeonline6 July 2018 at 00:01

    Hahaha I loved the ending! Great work!

    Love,
    Claudia
    http://thatsmeonline.net

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  10. Backpacking Series6 July 2018 at 00:14

    Nice story and good build up! But, was guessing there would be an anti climax ;)

    Best
    Backpacking Series
    https://www.backpackingseries.com

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  11. HealthyFitCouple6 July 2018 at 08:31

    Pizza is life! I can understand your love for it!

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  12. vaishali6 July 2018 at 12:24

    Ha ha...didn't expect the ending!

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  13. The Super Mom Life6 July 2018 at 18:19

    I definitely was not expecting that ending. Thanks for the laugh!

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    1. Amreena Jan7 July 2018 at 05:05

      ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️

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  14. Shanab6 July 2018 at 22:26

    I know this feeling all too well. Pizza is life!

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    1. Amreena Jan8 July 2018 at 13:45

      Don't worry. You are in the right direction. Keep going. 😉 😋

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  15. Mane7 July 2018 at 02:41

    Haha! True love is in the pizza. I can absolutely relate to the story 😁

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  16. Unknown7 July 2018 at 09:42

    Haha :) Whimsical !

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  17. Unknown7 July 2018 at 13:36

    Hahaha! That's awesome! Who doesn't love pizza?

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  18. Pujarini8 July 2018 at 01:16

    Haha! Loved the ending. Very funny!

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  19. Unknown8 July 2018 at 06:39

    Good writing, keep on sharing your stories!

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  20. Daddy J-I8 July 2018 at 10:25

    i agree that it is one kind of true love. ahaha :)

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  21. Admin8 July 2018 at 11:07

    Hahaha, I am laughing out loud. Pizza is my ride of die.

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  22. Anonymous9 July 2018 at 05:01

    Haha! I love it! Pizza is always bae.

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  23. Andrew12 July 2018 at 05:32

    I passed this article to my Mum :)

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    1. Amreena Jan12 July 2018 at 12:33

      Awww ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ hope she liked it.

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  24. Aftab24 July 2018 at 02:56

    Wish i cud Bang my head somewhere........

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  25. Katina Horton15 August 2018 at 15:02

    Not the ending I was expecting! I like it!

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  26. Unknown11 January 2019 at 09:15

    Damn... I was thinking of 'whatsapp-ing' you to know more details of his 'proposal' until I reached the end !
    That's what I call a 'great writer'... Keep it up ,mama !

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  27. Amreena Jan15 January 2019 at 23:31

    Haha. Thank you partner!! ❤ By the way.. You can watsapp me otherwise 😉

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